James Su 寫:
Okay Yu Hong.... in my opinion, you've done fine. Location is fine, your lighting is fine, and the colors are fine. The angle from which you shot is also fine. I like the Victoria Secret sign in the background. Her dress color is very nice and it matches the color of the sign. I would much rather see her in a Victoria Secret lingerie though, to match the whole feel of the picture (of course not possible to put her in a lingerie in a public place).
Although all the technical stuff described above is important, the most important part should be the humanistic aspect of this picture. How is she portrayed. When I see this picture, will I like her, will I fall madly in love with her. That's the focus. Make her look irresistible, and make her look like every man's fantasy.
The main issue: model..... 面部表情生硬, 眼睛沒有靈魂。 Model 完全沒有進入情況。 也許她很緊張。 如果她的頭髮波浪一些然後加厚,她會看著好很多。她的妝應該化的更有戲劇性 (dramatic) to match her mini dress. This is an evening look, so the hair and make-up should match the evening feel (sassy and sexy).
I hope I haven't offended anybody by posting this.
totally agree with you. I always think the most important part of a portrait is the expression/gesture of the subject. Sometimes a photo might be imperfect in techniques, but is still a memorable image because of the interesting expression/gesture of the subject...